Hey can someone read this?

It's not actually a big deal to start a sentence with a conjunction. If you consciously put it there for a reason, then leave it, it's a stylistic choice. It's kind of confusing because in high school they tell you you can't start a sentence with and, and in college they don't care! The only suggestions that I would make are to change some of the 'bots' to pronouns. Don't change all of them, but if you change a few it will flow better. Also, if your teachers are sticklers about conjunctions, then combine the sentences that begin with and, with the previous sentence. Hope this helps!